Saturday, October 11, 2008

I Can!!

It is my first poem ever. Tell me guys how it is!


I can!!

I can fly what if I don't have wings;
I can cry what if,tears,that my eye never brings!

I can rush what if my legs are tight;
I must brush what if my teeth are white:P

I can shine what if I aint the sun;
Look at my mind,which can even burn!

I can feel what if I never express..
I will set a will what if it can have a crash!

I can wish what if am unable to get..
I'll surely achieve it that I can bet!

I can push a dark,what if I aint a light;
I have to work hard what if my future is bright!

I can lie what if my tongue doesn't like;
I will die IF MY FRIEND IS KNIFE!


THE LAST LINE WAS WRITTEN TODAY!!

4 comments:

  1. i loved ur poem..but avoid using short forms in blog..coz that drives away d readers..... pretty kool blog.. i loved it!!

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  2. thnq debu..:)i even tried bt failed..:(

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  3. kya likha hai re tune wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......

    tuje toh writer hona maangta thaa....
    keep it up
    all the best dear......

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  4. One word..For this Poem..

    Amazing..[:)]

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